* click to enlargei totally rubbish at poems! but since miss shafika said it can be as rubbish as rubbish bin so there you go... hehehe.
okay, gtg! going to get tea, da milky one :) and some keropok lekor. bye.
ps: i forgot da question, so i dont know if my
poem has met da criteria or not. sorry miss s!
when i say u can write anything that you want, i meant that it could be nonsense but still in a poem form, but this is not a bad attempt though. however, i couldn't see any pronouns in here; reflective pronouns, possessive adj, possessive pronouns etc. is it possible for you to try write a new one and use those pronouns? good effort btw syzmira! :) *thumbs up for u* since u are the first one to submit! congratss
ReplyDeleteaye aye captain! :) i'll write a new one. do i have to rewrite it all over again or just add all those pronouns but still using the same ideas and contents there?
ReplyDeleteup to u.use ur own creativity! :) ave fun!
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